Details really do help! “I love the library because of all the books they have,” might be true, but it doesn’t offer many details.
The same simple library story with details might read like this: “Librarian Suzy Q at Dillsburg Library introduced me to Anne Perry novels. I love how those books let me explore another time in history. The mysteries challenge me to solve the problems before the detective does. I even made a friend through our shared love of reading these books when I joined the book club!”
This is a short example. Your story will probably be much longer, and that’s great! We look forward to reading it.